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Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring
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10-24-2017, 09:05 PM
Hi all! I can't believe it's been two months since I've posted this, but I've worked a lot to try and rewrite and edit this poem since reading your comments. I agree for sure that the first stanza was the strongest in the poem, and had a lot of trouble trying to improve the second and third stanzas to be honest. But now there are four! Thank you all again for your detailed edits and commentaries!
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Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring - by Lydish - 08-04-2017, 05:39 AM
RE: Some thoughts on spring - by fuzzyllama1 - 08-05-2017, 06:58 AM
RE: Some thoughts on spring - by Mbelcher - 08-11-2017, 12:09 AM
RE: Some thoughts on spring - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 10:19 AM
RE: Some thoughts on spring - by alatos - 08-17-2017, 08:05 AM
RE: Some thoughts on spring - by Lydish - 10-24-2017, 09:05 PM
RE: Edit 1: Some thoughts on spring - by Knot - 10-25-2017, 02:37 AM
RE: Edit 1: Some thoughts on spring - by Lydish - 10-31-2017, 10:30 PM
RE: Edit 1: Some thoughts on spring - by Achebe - 10-26-2017, 11:59 PM
RE: Edit 2: Some thoughts on spring - by Knot - 10-31-2017, 11:47 PM
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