10-20-2017, 03:38 PM
I know it is poetry, but I had questions about the punctuation:
Every night I can't sleep, when I try I hear it in my dreams
Maybe there should be a comma after every night?
Reminds me a bit of the tell-tale heart by Poe.
Every night I can't sleep, when I try I hear it in my dreams
Maybe there should be a comma after every night?
Reminds me a bit of the tell-tale heart by Poe.