Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5)

Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5)

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#11

10-20-2017, 09:26 AM

Keith, good call out on stationary. Unblown is new and made stationary redundant. I'll have to give deeper thought to your structural concerns and how the current structure may rob the piece of vibrancy.

Thank you,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 10-19-2017, 06:48 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by abstractconstriction - 10-19-2017, 02:57 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 12:14 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 01:01 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:39 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 03:06 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 03:27 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 03:59 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 05:54 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Keith - 10-20-2017, 07:44 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 09:26 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 2) - by Richard - 10-20-2017, 01:35 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 02:09 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Lizzie - 10-20-2017, 04:20 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 09:52 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-20-2017, 10:46 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Knot - 10-20-2017, 11:45 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 12:52 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Lizzie - 10-21-2017, 01:07 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 01:26 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Richard - 10-21-2017, 12:08 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by Todd - 10-21-2017, 01:58 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 4) - by vagabond - 10-21-2017, 04:34 PM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 02-23-2018, 07:08 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by vagabond - 02-23-2018, 10:18 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Richard - 02-27-2018, 08:48 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 06:11 AM

RE: Too Restless to Sleep (Revision 5) - by allisonkreid - 06-24-2018, 10:06 AM

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