Third Draft: Sleepless
#7
(10-19-2017, 02:43 AM)ellajam Wrote:  
(10-19-2017, 02:38 AM)Keith Wrote:  I thought that at first Rose but ......The one he never plays with, is current tense so he's alive
Often our dead don't have quite the same resistance to mixed tenses as we do. Smile
Too true and I should not have assumed, sorry Rose, Richard should be the one to clarify your comment. Now back to Richards poem as we are in IC and others will want to comment.

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-15-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 01:06 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 01:50 AM
RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 02:30 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:38 AM
RE: Sleepless - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:43 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:58 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-19-2017, 10:29 AM
RE: Sleepless - by illya_v - 10-19-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-25-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 10-25-2017, 11:50 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-26-2017, 01:03 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-13-2017, 04:55 AM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 11-13-2017, 11:27 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-14-2017, 12:05 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by jackjackjack - 11-15-2017, 12:52 AM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 12:26 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-16-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 12-17-2017, 05:33 AM



Users browsing this thread: 2 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!