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Third Draft: Sleepless
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10-19-2017, 02:43 AM
(10-19-2017, 02:38 AM)Keith Wrote: I thought that at first Rose but ......The one he never plays with, is current tense so he's aliveOften our dead don't have quite the same resistance to mixed tenses as we do. 
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Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-15-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 01:06 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 01:50 AM
RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 02:30 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:38 AM
RE: Sleepless - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:43 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:58 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-19-2017, 10:29 AM
RE: Sleepless - by illya_v - 10-19-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-25-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 10-25-2017, 11:50 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-26-2017, 01:03 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-13-2017, 04:55 AM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 11-13-2017, 11:27 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-14-2017, 12:05 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by jackjackjack - 11-15-2017, 12:52 AM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 12:26 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-16-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 12-17-2017, 05:33 AM
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