Edit 1 - clear recurrence

Edit 1 - clear recurrence

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10-19-2017, 02:27 AM

(10-18-2017, 12:56 PM)illya_v Wrote: creek cascades down,
pooling and overflowing—
endless beginnings

You might consider "overflowing pools" or "overflow pooling", something to avoid the two "ing"s in a row.

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Edit 1 - clear recurrence - by illya_v - 10-18-2017, 12:56 PM

RE: clear recurrence - by Achebe - 10-18-2017, 01:14 PM

RE: clear recurrence - by Todd - 10-18-2017, 01:43 PM

RE: clear recurrence - by RiverNotch - 10-19-2017, 12:31 AM

RE: clear recurrence - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:27 AM

RE: clear recurrence - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 03:10 AM

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