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A handful of dirt

A handful of dirt
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10-19-2017, 01:16 AM
@dedalus87 Thank you kindly for the feedback some good points for me to work with. I feel the edit is beconing, my re-reads of this allow me too see how much borderline cliche there is in it. Thanks again Keith

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Messages In This Thread
A handful of dirt - by Keith - 10-07-2017, 05:00 AM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 05:17 AM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Knot - 10-12-2017, 03:58 AM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Wjames - 10-12-2017, 09:51 AM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Keith - 10-13-2017, 02:01 AM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Linda - 10-14-2017, 02:57 AM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Keith - 10-16-2017, 03:18 PM
RE: A handful of dirt - by dedalus87 - 10-17-2017, 02:00 PM
RE: A handful of dirt - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 01:16 AM



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