10-18-2017, 07:16 PM
Although I'm not keen on on the title or the placement of the punctuation, I've added a few bits 
, overall I like it,
My Kindergarten Teacher told me that
I'd either be a retard or genius,
I thought there was no difference.
Day dreams just feel distant,
the time is closin' in,
my heart's pump don't match my pace.
Breathe escape; shell's encase,
my Father's roof shall crack
and I will be born again.
Flip a coin cause I stand
to gain everything
, overall I like it, My Kindergarten Teacher told me that
I'd either be a retard or genius,
I thought there was no difference.
Day dreams just feel distant,
the time is closin' in,
my heart's pump don't match my pace.
Breathe escape; shell's encase,
my Father's roof shall crack
and I will be born again.
Flip a coin cause I stand
to gain everything