10-18-2017, 12:56 PM
creek cascades,
overflowing pools—
endless beginnings
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Thanks all. Regarding the title, I thought haikus didn't have titles so I created one to try to express the haiku. Comments were helpful, especially the suggestion to omit "down," in retrospect that was a glaring oddity.
overflowing pools—
endless beginnings
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Thanks all. Regarding the title, I thought haikus didn't have titles so I created one to try to express the haiku. Comments were helpful, especially the suggestion to omit "down," in retrospect that was a glaring oddity.