My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language]

[silentseas]

Hey, the first two stanzas really set up the poem well, I think. I feel like the narrator felt like they were faced with these choices and expectations. I was personally curious as to how to first half of the poem is related the second. I think those two could be brought closer together if you were interested in going that direction. Again, great job and especially like the first two stanzas.

Also, "shell's encase" is a really interesting phrase - did you have something in particular in mind when you wrote that?

Thank you for posting!