Like a Walk in the Park

[Linda]

thanks for looking in Knot, much to consider. Who does any narrator speak to but the reader. Why? I'm sure you can answer that, why does any one write a poem.
Regards,
Linda

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Hi Richard,
I appreciate your valid suggestions. I will be considering the great feedback I see here and take from it what I can, I will definitely nix what seems redundant, and cliche, then post again.
thanks,
Linda