My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language]

[Caine]

My Kindergarten Teacher

My Kindergarten Teacher tells me that
I'd either be a retard or genius. present tense and past tense makes these lines very confusing for me
I thought there was no difference,"Comma your way into the next stanza? Why?! It's not purposeful, it's not sensible, it's not even stylistically poetic" ~ Tectak. Going back, maybe you want told and not tells?

Day dreams just feel distant
The time is closin' in
My heart's pump don't match my pace,

Breathe escape; shell's encase
My Father's roof shall crack
And I will be born again, this is an interesting way to describe suicide

Flip a coin cause I stand
To Gain Everythingodd capitalization and superfluous cliche make the ending weak.

I edited it to told, ty.

Honestly how should I punctuate it, if not commas? 

Also I'm a strong believer in reader's interpretation but I did not write it int he intent of suicide.

As for the ending I edited to lower case.  Cant you elaborate on the superfluous cliche.