Authorial Intrusion

[Lizzie]

I take this to mean that poems shaped like boats or insects are already insufferable.

I've never in my life written something like that. These accusations! 

He didn't like my short lines and enjambment, that's all.

could you not link to the actual poem? it would give everyone some context as the comment is barely intelligible.

I can. I couldn't justify bumping the thread for an abstract question.

Here it is. It's at the end: http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-20319.html