10-10-2017, 12:22 PM
(10-10-2017, 11:43 AM)Caine Wrote:Hi Caine,My Kindergarten Teacher
My Kindergarten Teacher tells me that
I'd either be a retard or genius
I thought there was no difference,
Day dreams just feel distant
The time is closin' in
My heart's pump don't match my pace,
Breathe escape; shell's encase
My Father's roof shall crack
And I will be born again,
Flip a coin cause I stand
To Gain Everything
A poem with language loose as this maybe would be easier to read with lower case letters beginning each line? And maybe lower case those other words like "gain" and "everything", words that don't need to be capitalized. I also wish you lingered on the topic of your kindergarten teacher a little more, since it was in the title.

