10-10-2017, 12:19 PM
it sounds like gibberish to me. i assume when the commentor refers to “form” they are not talking about traditional forms (as is usually intended by using this term), but rather an idiosyncratic form peculiar to the author. the implication for 1st person poetry is, supposedly, there’s too much poet and not enough poem. and although this could potentially be a problem, i can’t see how a well written poem would suffer simply from the combination of original form and 1st person narrative.
but it’s 4 in the morning. my warp core generator isn’t at 100% capacity, so i’m probably missing something.
but it’s 4 in the morning. my warp core generator isn’t at 100% capacity, so i’m probably missing something.
