10-10-2017, 09:41 AM
Hey Richard,
Thanks a bunch for your comments. In the second stanza I was trying to portray this ghost as anything other than what could've been my mom. I think I might've found a solution for that in my edit. Also if I end with an ellipsis would it be fine to begin with one as well to imply the poem loops? I did so in my first edit and if it doesn't work just let me know.
Thanks a bunch for your comments. In the second stanza I was trying to portray this ghost as anything other than what could've been my mom. I think I might've found a solution for that in my edit. Also if I end with an ellipsis would it be fine to begin with one as well to imply the poem loops? I did so in my first edit and if it doesn't work just let me know.