Second Edit: One Night Stand

Second Edit: One Night Stand

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#13

10-09-2017, 10:55 PM

Hey Todd,
Thanks for the feedback. I was curious if the reworked first stanza was effective, so it's nice to hear some thoughts on that. I think I'm almost there with this one.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Messages In This Thread

Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-06-2017, 11:59 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by alonso ramoran - 10-06-2017, 01:37 PM

RE: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-07-2017, 01:33 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by vagabond - 10-07-2017, 02:37 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 03:20 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-07-2017, 10:15 AM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-08-2017, 04:34 AM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-08-2017, 12:48 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by vagabond - 10-08-2017, 01:46 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-08-2017, 09:51 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-09-2017, 04:56 AM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-09-2017, 01:27 PM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-09-2017, 10:55 PM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-10-2017, 12:01 AM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-10-2017, 05:48 AM

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