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Second Edit: One Night Stand

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10-09-2017, 04:56 AM

Hey Knot, vagabond, and Todd,
Thanks for the feedback. You all gave me some wonderful points to think about with moving forward with this piece.

Thanks again,
Richard

Hey all,
I got an idea while rereading the critiques, to I ending up doing an edit of this quicker than I expected. I did some pruning as suggested, so feel free to let me know if this is an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-06-2017, 11:59 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by alonso ramoran - 10-06-2017, 01:37 PM

RE: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-07-2017, 01:33 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by vagabond - 10-07-2017, 02:37 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 03:20 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-07-2017, 10:15 AM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-08-2017, 04:34 AM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-08-2017, 12:48 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by vagabond - 10-08-2017, 01:46 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-08-2017, 09:51 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-09-2017, 04:56 AM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-09-2017, 01:27 PM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-09-2017, 10:55 PM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-10-2017, 12:01 AM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-10-2017, 05:48 AM

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