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10-09-2017, 03:04 AM

(09-22-2017, 03:09 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: under a done-to-death moon
you are a swan’s neck—
too perfect to swallow

Tiger,

I love the sonic of "done-to-death moon" - the simplicity and impact you've composed in three lines
just amazes me too. Smile

Good work!

Luna

In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....

(Chris Martin)

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9-22-17 - by Tiger the Lion - 09-22-2017, 03:09 PM

RE: 9-22-17 - by Keith - 09-23-2017, 04:30 AM

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