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Second Edit: One Night Stand

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10-08-2017, 04:34 AM

Hey all,
I went a bit overboard with the edit for this one. I realized what I wanted to say, and that I hadn't done a very good job of it in the first draft. The result is a longer poem that lives up to its title more. Feel free to let me know if this is an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-06-2017, 11:59 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by alonso ramoran - 10-06-2017, 01:37 PM

RE: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-07-2017, 01:33 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by vagabond - 10-07-2017, 02:37 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 03:20 AM

RE: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-07-2017, 10:15 AM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-08-2017, 04:34 AM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-08-2017, 12:48 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by vagabond - 10-08-2017, 01:46 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-08-2017, 09:51 PM

RE: First Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-09-2017, 04:56 AM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Todd - 10-09-2017, 01:27 PM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-09-2017, 10:55 PM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Knot - 10-10-2017, 12:01 AM

RE: Second Edit: One Night Stand - by Richard - 10-10-2017, 05:48 AM

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