10-07-2017, 10:15 AM
Hey Todd, vagabond, Knot and alexorande,
I greatly appreciate all the feedback. I was a bit unsure about this one overall, but parts of it felt right to me. I think this is one of those times when I wasn't clear enough because I was trying too much to be poetic instead of focusing on what I wanted to truly say. You all gave me some ideas I plan on considering when I work on the next draft.
Thanks again,
Richard
I greatly appreciate all the feedback. I was a bit unsure about this one overall, but parts of it felt right to me. I think this is one of those times when I wasn't clear enough because I was trying too much to be poetic instead of focusing on what I wanted to truly say. You all gave me some ideas I plan on considering when I work on the next draft.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.