NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning
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Todd - strong work - a keeper. Vagabond - oh yes, I like the way we end back in the dream world, before consequences.

CRNDL - this works on different levels for me. Satisfying and enigmatic too.

Watch it on rewind

See how bodies and debris fly
from the river and its banks,
through the sky, back into the train
as it rises, Car Z first, to the bridge
now whole again. It backs away
increasing speed, vanishing
behind the sign that reads
‘Tangiwai. No
refreshments.’

https://www.nzonscreen.com/title/the-tru...l-disaster
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NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by just mercedes - 10-07-2017, 05:54 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by Todd - 10-07-2017, 06:51 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by just mercedes - 10-07-2017, 09:07 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by just mercedes - 10-07-2017, 09:34 AM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by Anna - 10-07-2017, 03:15 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by just mercedes - 10-08-2017, 02:31 PM
RE: NaPoMo NZ Day 7 - end to beginning - by just mercedes - 10-09-2017, 04:50 AM



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