10-07-2017, 03:28 AM
Keith,
I'm all for pruning, but I read the final version first and it really made little sense to me, until I went back and read the earlier drafts. You cut some very beautiful lines.
"its" should be "theirs"
best,
dale
I'm all for pruning, but I read the final version first and it really made little sense to me, until I went back and read the earlier drafts. You cut some very beautiful lines.
"its" should be "theirs"
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.