10-04-2017, 04:26 PM
When you say "Interesting image. It's a shame you didn't expand on this. I find you presenting images throughout the poem that you just glaze over."
I am not sure to understand that concept; if imagery is used, either it works or it doesn't. If it works, it says what it needs to, if it doesn't, it should be out. In which case and why should it be expanded? If it needs to be expanded, why bother?
I am not sure to understand that concept; if imagery is used, either it works or it doesn't. If it works, it says what it needs to, if it doesn't, it should be out. In which case and why should it be expanded? If it needs to be expanded, why bother?
Huckleberry