First Edit: On my 36th Birthday
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Hey Todd,
Thanks for the feedback. The ending is proving to be somewhat elusive, so I appreciate the suggestion there. I think I'm going to let this one sit for a bit though before attempting another edit. I'm hoping some time might even spark an useful idea about the oven image.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-17-2017, 05:50 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Todd - 09-19-2017, 06:33 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Achebe - 09-19-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by vagabond - 09-19-2017, 09:55 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-20-2017, 10:46 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Todd - 09-20-2017, 11:03 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-20-2017, 11:26 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by fuzzyllama1 - 09-23-2017, 08:47 AM
RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 11:50 AM
RE: First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-30-2017, 11:56 AM
RE: First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Todd - 09-30-2017, 09:56 PM
RE: First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 10-01-2017, 03:23 AM



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