First Edit: On my 36th Birthday

First Edit: On my 36th Birthday

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09-30-2017, 11:56 AM

Hey all,
I decided to play around with the structure a bit in this edit. Feel free to let me know if this is an improvement over the original.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-17-2017, 05:50 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Todd - 09-19-2017, 06:33 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Achebe - 09-19-2017, 06:56 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by vagabond - 09-19-2017, 09:55 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-20-2017, 10:46 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Todd - 09-20-2017, 11:03 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-20-2017, 11:26 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by fuzzyllama1 - 09-23-2017, 08:47 AM

RE: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-27-2017, 11:50 AM

RE: First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 09-30-2017, 11:56 AM

RE: First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Todd - 09-30-2017, 09:56 PM

RE: First Edit: On my 36th Birthday - by Richard - 10-01-2017, 03:23 AM

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