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Her gracefulness
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09-29-2017, 01:57 PM
Beautiful writing! The words feel light as a feather, yet they burn with a warm, soft passion... if this poem was a color scheme, I would identify it as cream, flax and a touch of warm burgundy! If I were to critique it, I would say that the second stanza feels a little wordier in a way that takes away from the lightness I mentioned. Overall, very nice and I enjoyed it very much!
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Her gracefulness - by Sonata - 01-11-2013, 08:18 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Fathima - 01-11-2013, 08:22 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Sonata - 01-11-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by billy - 01-11-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 09:02 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by arbil_poieo - 01-11-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Dcandy925 - 09-10-2017, 06:59 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by talktalk - 09-29-2017, 01:57 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by ClaireLou - 09-29-2017, 09:06 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Huckleberry - 10-02-2017, 07:01 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by OutofmycomfortZone - 01-14-2020, 05:20 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Knot - 01-17-2020, 10:10 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by audrey - 01-18-2020, 06:36 AM
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