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[rayheinrich]

Hi pigpen. New here! I've been writing all my life. Lately, I have just been writing short phrases now and again, as well as lyrics. I thought it'd be fun to put them up for critiques!

Not another Kiwean! Talk about alien hordes... (though maybe I'm just scared of competition).
Well, ok, I can't stop you (not without getting mercedes on my case).
Welcome!
Ray

P.S. And if you're going to be here, you might as well join in with us on PWoF. It's going to be fun (and it being
non-competitive and all, I think I'm safe from you there).

P.P.S. You said: "I have just been writing short phrases now and again".
That reminds me of a quote from Jorie Graham:
"Writing poetry is learning to express yourself in incomplete sentences."