09-28-2017, 10:28 AM
@todd
Thank you for your continued support with the poem, I must say I share your concern about how the edit comes across when stood alone. That's the main reason I move up the scattering of ashes because I wanted to put down the breadcrumbs for the reader. It definitely needs a new title as it was originally a NaPo poem, problem is I suck at titles, so need to try harder. I've looked at everything you comment on and made a few tweets as suggested. Thank again Keith
Thank you for your continued support with the poem, I must say I share your concern about how the edit comes across when stood alone. That's the main reason I move up the scattering of ashes because I wanted to put down the breadcrumbs for the reader. It definitely needs a new title as it was originally a NaPo poem, problem is I suck at titles, so need to try harder. I've looked at everything you comment on and made a few tweets as suggested. Thank again Keith
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