Edit 3: Sepulture

[ClaireLou]

I really enjoyed it, the only things I would look into changing are as follows:

Verse 2 - I would remove the first "And" having it as "We are left with the pall". Also is it not "age old" in lieu of "ages old"?

Verse 3 - I would just pop a comma after "reset"

Tweaks definitely an improvement