09-25-2017, 10:53 PM
(09-25-2017, 10:34 PM)dukealien Wrote: Thanks to all commenters!
@billy - Good point. "Caught" as title, or on L4? L4, I think, to click with "quivering."
@Rivernotch - End of line punctuation is among my many weaknesses, particularly in free verse. Have to try some exercises...
Code:You like
you like,
you like.
You like?
You like...
you like --
you like!
Was thinking of "caught" when I first read it. The C and Q would play off each other nicely. Better placed in L4 than the title IMO.
@rayheinrich - Am I mystified, or being lightly doxxed? Those two digits *do* appear on my car's licen(s/c)e plates - and in that exact order! *shudder*
