09-24-2017, 08:13 AM
A few things that stood out to me in particular
- your style is raw
- you're looking back in time
- its melancholy
I think its a good expression of self honestly.
I kinda thought I was reading someone's texts while looking over your poem
- your style is raw
- you're looking back in time
- its melancholy
I think its a good expression of self honestly.
I kinda thought I was reading someone's texts while looking over your poem
assholery not intended .