Long Distance
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A few things that stood out to me in particular
- your style is raw
- you're looking back in time
- its melancholy

I think its a good expression of self honestly.
I kinda thought I was reading someone's texts while looking over your poem
assholery not intended .
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Long Distance - by JMannUK - 09-17-2017, 01:04 PM
RE: Long Distance - by Richard - 09-18-2017, 04:46 AM
RE: Long Distance - by ClaireLou - 09-20-2017, 09:23 PM
RE: Long Distance - by billy - 09-21-2017, 04:58 PM
RE: Long Distance - by BW BRINE - 09-23-2017, 05:54 AM
RE: Long Distance - by cloud - 09-24-2017, 08:13 AM



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