< if i haven't confused the dreams >
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i like the image on its own -- i don't particularly like it with this piece. it's unnecessary -- or perhaps i've just had enough of rain, this damned rainy season is making my get-home-at-seven-o'clocks become get-home-at-nine. really, my schedule is rather ideal: fuck the Philippine public transportation system, fuck Manila's ill-planned streets, fuck anthropogenic climate change.

as for the piece itself, i don't think there's really anything to say. it's its own thing, when compared to the image -- when compared to stuff outside of the thread, well, it definitely pushed a little tear out of my eye. really beautiful, and a little purer than some of the stuff you've lately posted before this, in the sense that, at least for me, the emotions are evoked without utilizing any special techniques (or soft cheek). it might venture into the too mundane, it reads that unassuming, but then "clocks twist right", and, at least for me, the solid memorability of "if i haven't confused the dreams". really, really, really lovely work.
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RE: < if i haven't confused the dreams > - by RiverNotch - 09-21-2017, 01:36 PM



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