09-20-2017, 11:03 AM
I can see how your subject fits the piece. However, if you want readers to grasp where you're going, the title probably needs to do more work. You can still be slightly cryptic. Example to get you thinking:You and the Open Oven.
Just a thought. The title change is purely optional of course, sometimes the reader should have ambiguity.
Just a thought. The title change is purely optional of course, sometimes the reader should have ambiguity.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson