09-17-2017, 12:31 AM
Hi, alexorande
I am sorry I so blatantly ditched your ghost title. It was out of sheer ignorance, though I'm not sure it would be helpful to a typical reader. I am not aware of common metaphor used in writing and poetry. I just googled ghost used in metaphor and learned it is symbolic of our past, or a weight of our past. That could explain your choice of its use as ghosts might indicate past troubles that would cause the rings to be tossed. I am a novice of poetry code, and what I had learned in the past, I am afraid I've forgotten. I hope to see your final revision. Have a wonderful day.
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I am sorry I so blatantly ditched your ghost title. It was out of sheer ignorance, though I'm not sure it would be helpful to a typical reader. I am not aware of common metaphor used in writing and poetry. I just googled ghost used in metaphor and learned it is symbolic of our past, or a weight of our past. That could explain your choice of its use as ghosts might indicate past troubles that would cause the rings to be tossed. I am a novice of poetry code, and what I had learned in the past, I am afraid I've forgotten. I hope to see your final revision. Have a wonderful day.
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