09-16-2017, 11:49 PM
Hi nibbed
Thank you for your comments. I'll be sure to revise with your words in mind. I was struggling with the title a bit and I hope to come up with a better one that more accurately addresses the themes and what's going on in the poem. I also messed up with the ghost/roots/protecting the treasure part. I don't know how that slipped me haha, gonna fix that.
Thank you for your comments. I'll be sure to revise with your words in mind. I was struggling with the title a bit and I hope to come up with a better one that more accurately addresses the themes and what's going on in the poem. I also messed up with the ghost/roots/protecting the treasure part. I don't know how that slipped me haha, gonna fix that.