The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision 2)
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Mercedes: I like the when also. Appreciate the comments on the edit.

Abu: Thank you, I appreciate the comments and the thoughts. It's interesting to consider the lines from different angles. I'll experiment a bit offline.

Thank you, both.

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision 2) - by Todd - 09-08-2017, 11:06 PM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine - by RiverNotch - 09-10-2017, 11:48 PM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine - by Todd - 09-11-2017, 12:04 AM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine - by Keith - 09-13-2017, 07:40 AM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine - by just mercedes - 09-13-2017, 08:41 AM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine - by Todd - 09-13-2017, 11:04 AM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision) - by Todd - 09-13-2017, 11:48 PM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision) - by Todd - 09-14-2017, 06:29 AM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision) - by just mercedes - 09-14-2017, 09:12 AM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision) - by Abu jafoe - 09-14-2017, 09:55 PM
RE: The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision) - by Todd - 09-14-2017, 10:41 PM



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