09-14-2017, 08:10 AM
thank you alexorande and Andurian
it started out as one poem then it became necessary
to make it into two poems. now the surge of the write has fizzled
so I will likely put it aside for a later look.
thank you both for considering my poem for critique.
nibbed
it started out as one poem then it became necessary
to make it into two poems. now the surge of the write has fizzled
so I will likely put it aside for a later look.
thank you both for considering my poem for critique.
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love

