The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision 2)

[vagabond]

Revision

Mine is the vine’s melody; 
skin strained beneath the sun.

This song kisses your lips; 
you taste my aria.

Original

Mine was the vine’s melody,
skin strained beneath the sun.

My song kisses your lips,
and you taste its aria.

the line "skin strained beneath the sun" makes me think the melody is not yet voiced.. and i love that metaphor.
maybe it could be connected with the next line better by writing "when this song kisses your lips you taste my aria"