Tina and Dwayne

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Tina and Dwayne

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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09-12-2017, 03:51 PM

i enjoyed the story specially Tina's

i get the impression these two are known by the speaker; if so, is 'they said" needed in the last stanza?

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Tina and Dwayne - by Tiger the Lion - 09-12-2017, 03:05 PM

RE: Tina and Dwayne - by billy - 09-12-2017, 03:51 PM

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