Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2

[just mercedes]

Very much like the edited poem section -- prefer the first version of the prose, though, as it makes the interaction between hunter and dingoes more dynamic. Also, I suggest a formatting change for the prose section, just to make the two elements more distinct -- maybe italics?

Thank you for that! I remembered how to hide a spoiler.   I'm thinking bout the difference in the prose versions.

But again, No to the italics - the form is quasi-haibun, and for me the distinction between prose and verse is there. Maybe some extra white space between the two?