Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2

Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2

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09-12-2017, 01:52 PM

Very much like the edited poem section -- prefer the first version of the prose, though, as it makes the interaction between hunter and dingoes more dynamic. Also, I suggest a formatting change for the prose section, just to make the two elements more distinct -- maybe italics?

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Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-03-2017, 01:06 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by Todd - 09-04-2017, 12:17 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-04-2017, 04:32 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-04-2017, 08:25 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by CRNDLSM - 09-04-2017, 09:44 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-04-2017, 10:06 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by CRNDLSM - 09-05-2017, 02:16 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-05-2017, 04:59 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by Richard - 09-05-2017, 01:11 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-05-2017, 01:35 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by billy - 09-05-2017, 05:24 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-05-2017, 06:20 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by Todd - 09-05-2017, 10:34 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) - by just mercedes - 09-06-2017, 03:25 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-12-2017, 08:38 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by Richard - 09-12-2017, 12:05 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-12-2017, 12:56 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by RiverNotch - 09-12-2017, 01:52 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-12-2017, 02:19 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by Todd - 09-14-2017, 03:53 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-14-2017, 08:15 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by vagabond - 09-17-2017, 05:37 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-17-2017, 06:28 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by vagabond - 09-17-2017, 04:38 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by crow - 09-17-2017, 08:24 PM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by just mercedes - 09-18-2017, 07:46 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by RiverNotch - 09-18-2017, 10:31 AM

RE: Dingo (after Judith Wright) Edit 2 - by crow - 09-19-2017, 01:52 PM

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