09-12-2017, 12:05 PM
Hey Mercedes,
I quite like your latest edit. It's concise in its language use while the overall subject matter still sticks in my mind long after reading it. I definitely think you're done.
Nice work,
Richard
I quite like your latest edit. It's concise in its language use while the overall subject matter still sticks in my mind long after reading it. I definitely think you're done.
Nice work,
Richard
Time is the best editor.

