First Edit: Friendship

First Edit: Friendship

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#11

09-12-2017, 11:58 AM

Hey Todd and Billy,
Thanks for the kind words and feedback. I was a little unsure about the changes in the third stanza, so I'm glad to hear that it works with the rest of the poem.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: Friendship - by Richard - 09-05-2017, 12:39 PM

RE: Friendship - by Todd - 09-05-2017, 12:52 PM

RE: Friendship - by Richard - 09-05-2017, 01:14 PM

RE: Friendship - by billy - 09-05-2017, 05:09 PM

RE: Friendship - by Richard - 09-06-2017, 11:06 AM

RE: Friendship - by Achebe - 09-06-2017, 12:40 PM

RE: Friendship - by Richard - 09-07-2017, 11:21 AM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by Richard - 09-11-2017, 11:43 AM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by Todd - 09-11-2017, 12:19 PM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by billy - 09-11-2017, 04:20 PM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by Richard - 09-12-2017, 11:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by Knot - 10-06-2017, 01:16 AM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by Richard - 10-06-2017, 11:31 AM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by UlrickMasters - 10-14-2017, 12:56 AM

RE: First Edit: Friendship - by Richard - 10-15-2017, 10:19 AM

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