The Grape Dreams of Wine (revision 2)

[Todd]

Revision 2

Mine is the vine’s melody; 
skin strained beneath the sun.
When this song kisses your lips,
you taste my aria.

Revision

Mine is the vine’s melody; 
skin strained beneath the sun.

This song kisses your lips; 
you taste my aria.


Original

Mine was the vine’s melody,
skin strained beneath the sun.

My song kisses your lips,
and you taste its aria.