09-07-2017, 11:21 AM
Hey Achebe,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm still working on the revision. I'm a bit up in the air with this one right now, so any suggestions are welcomed. By the way, "opiates" is most definitely not a verb. I think this is one of those times when I'm guilty of trying to be too poetic. Needless to say, opiates will not be in the next version of the poem.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I'm still working on the revision. I'm a bit up in the air with this one right now, so any suggestions are welcomed. By the way, "opiates" is most definitely not a verb. I think this is one of those times when I'm guilty of trying to be too poetic. Needless to say, opiates will not be in the next version of the poem.
Thanks again,
Richard
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