Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park

Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park

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#26

09-05-2017, 04:28 AM

Hey Just,
Thanks for the feedback. This one has been one heck of a ride in terms of editing and such. Your excellent feedback actually gave me some awesome ideas on how to tweak this poem even more.

Thanks again,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 12:37 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by vagabond - 06-07-2017, 08:18 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 09:57 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by homer1950 - 06-08-2017, 12:31 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-08-2017, 02:08 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by makeshift - 06-10-2017, 08:33 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by nibbed - 06-10-2017, 09:17 PM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-12-2017, 01:27 AM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Keith - 06-12-2017, 05:29 AM

RE: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-12-2017, 05:56 AM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by makeshift - 06-14-2017, 05:00 PM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-15-2017, 06:16 AM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by vagabond - 06-15-2017, 08:01 AM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-15-2017, 10:02 PM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by tectak - 06-30-2017, 01:47 AM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-30-2017, 02:38 AM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Todd - 06-30-2017, 03:33 AM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 06-30-2017, 09:56 PM

RE: First Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 07-03-2017, 03:34 AM

RE: Second Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by lyon - 08-09-2017, 01:27 AM

RE: Second Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 08-11-2017, 08:38 AM

RE: Third Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 09-01-2017, 05:36 AM

RE: Third Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Todd - 09-01-2017, 06:00 AM

RE: Fourth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 09-01-2017, 12:16 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by just mercedes - 09-03-2017, 12:51 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 09-05-2017, 04:28 AM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by billy - 09-05-2017, 04:54 PM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 09-06-2017, 10:53 AM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Todd - 09-06-2017, 11:00 AM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 09-06-2017, 12:13 PM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by billy - 09-06-2017, 04:47 PM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by just mercedes - 09-06-2017, 05:26 PM

RE: Fifth Edit: The Swans in Wentworth Park - by Richard - 09-07-2017, 11:30 AM

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