09-04-2017, 10:06 AM
Thanks CRNDLSM for your read and comments. In the prose part I tried to keep emotion and judgement out of the recital. I wonder now about 'lazy'. It is a judgement rather than a description. He had a lot of bush skills, as you say survival skills, but to trap a dingo you have to leave no scent on the traps, a regime of preparation he didn't want to deal with. I'm taking the 'lazy' under consideration.
Thanks.
Thanks.
