The Difference

The Difference - Edit 1

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#10

09-03-2017, 07:30 PM

Hi Dukealien. I didn't want to comment for a bit, but it seems like the poem has been spoiled through revision to me.
I have noticed that happens at times. A good, solid, clever poem gets critiqued to death until it nowhere resembles its
original beauty. What a shame. I like the original.

nibbed

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The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 08-28-2017, 11:37 AM

RE: The Difference - by Richard - 08-28-2017, 01:18 PM

RE: The Difference - by ellajam - 08-28-2017, 05:57 PM

RE: The Difference - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 06:44 AM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 08-29-2017, 10:16 PM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 11:40 AM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 09-02-2017, 10:18 PM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 09-03-2017, 11:12 AM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by just mercedes - 09-03-2017, 12:23 PM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by nibbed - 09-03-2017, 07:30 PM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by Wastrel - 09-03-2017, 09:24 PM

RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 09-04-2017, 06:22 AM

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