The Difference - Edit 1
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(back from crossing a day behind Harvey... who was, as cinemavens would expect, invisible)

@RiverNotch - Wondering if the pre-Edit 1 version is like what you have in mind?

@Richard and others - the other direction to go would be @ellajam's of removing the heavy-handed definitions/headings.  Seems a bit Victorian (the era, not the state) -

Quote:Bachelor, standing...
...unmanly:  ah, solitude!
But then, to find
no expected latch-key in his pocket -
O, loneliness!
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The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 08-28-2017, 11:37 AM
RE: The Difference - by Richard - 08-28-2017, 01:18 PM
RE: The Difference - by ellajam - 08-28-2017, 05:57 PM
RE: The Difference - by Todd - 08-29-2017, 06:44 AM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 08-29-2017, 10:16 PM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by Richard - 08-30-2017, 11:40 AM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 09-02-2017, 10:18 PM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 09-03-2017, 11:12 AM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by just mercedes - 09-03-2017, 12:23 PM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by nibbed - 09-03-2017, 07:30 PM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by Wastrel - 09-03-2017, 09:24 PM
RE: The Difference - Edit 1 - by dukealien - 09-04-2017, 06:22 AM



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